For my father

North Woods

The walls of this fishing camp
are filled with dust and so damp
spots of wood rot, and smell of mold.
It's raining; the whiskey is almost gone;
we sit and talk, and listen...

The wind in these north woods divides our souls
between what we wanted -- ambrosia like dew,
the fairy princess, the golden apples --
and what is -- the trees, the rain,
my father and me going fishing
for the splinters of bliss we pull from life.
I've been lucky, he says.
We are lucky.

We say luck a little out of fear
from swings swung to nooses
like love to loathing,
like drink to drunk.

But we are drunk in luck;
luck is the rain, the trees,
the fish that rolls above the water's surface
on the last cast.



  1. Fabulous. I LOVE the line “the splinters of bliss we pull from life”. Well done!

  2. john c. quigg · · Reply

    I remember this piece. I have it among other things you’ve written; I’ve saved. It’s good. Thanks.

  3. Epicuranoid · · Reply

    Thanks both! Seemed appropriate for father’s day.

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